The first few times I read through Steven Staples article about
the relationship between globalization and militarism a few things stood out
that I was eager to call him out on. It was very apparent that he was using a
web of rhetorical fallacies and the venomous verbiage of a skillful up-talker.
Every time I sat down to write I was fueled with fire and a
shoe, ready to brand the authors rhetoric as fraudulent and end the spiders’
career of deceitful spinning. As soon as my pen scribbled the words, “[t]he
author [was] ineffective” (Zebra 1) an empty void as large as the pit in my gut
emptied my brain. I wanted to claim it was just the authors toxins getting to
me, but the arguments I wanted to refute weren’t even claims he made.
Calling his rhetoric ineffective because it is laced in
trickery would be paramount to saying a trap door spider isn’t a spider because
it uses a less noticeable and more aggressive means to catch its’ prey.
Through the means of open ended examples and usage of words
that are either exaggerations or intense pacifiers Stephen Staples is, indeed,
very effective in persuading proponents of globalization that their movement
towards a greater world economy comes with a price of detrimental consequences.
Staples makes few claims on his own: “[economic] inequality
is growing … conflict and wars are emerging[;] it is important to see the
connection between [the] two” (Staples 44). Then, by providing supporting
evidence about the escalation of wars—to include civil wars—readers stop
relying on Staples to provide them with conclusions and begin to interpret the
situations on their own. If this happens to you, you best be careful! You are
walking into lethal trap. He specifically mentions the results of economic
inequality happening in Asia—in 1999—which caused a violent stir with probable use of nuclear weapons (45).
Wait, what? Economic inequality leads to global war? This
claim stands out like a sore thumb, possibly sore because it just got bit by
the arachnid of rhetoric. Most readers will keep reading without batting an
eye, that’s the first symptom of his bite, thinking the argument was their own
idea. Staples never makes that heavy of a claim, so yes, the reader came to
that conclusion on their own. How wants to debate themselves? If you answered, ‘not
me, that’s crazy!’ then you will probably accept that somewhat over-the-top
argument because youa came up with it yourself. Rather, you would have if you
read Staples’ article and not this one first. If you answered, ‘I won’t debate
myself, but I’ll take a spider on any day,’ congratulations, the venom has made
you terminal. You are going to disregard the argument altogether wither because
it is farfetched or because it isn’t even one of his claims, so instead you
will settle for his first and actual claim, “economic inequality is growing”.
Ipso facto you are still persuaded, even if it is just a little, by his intricate
fallacy.
I think this is the material I will cover in my rhetorical
analysis.
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